Tutoring Session #15

This tutoring session was my second one. In this tutoring session the tutor help me design an outline for my descriptive essay. He typed out the way an outline should look like. But since I really did not have much written down I had to make up things along the way. What I like about my tutor was that he made my paper come alive. He also added his own ideas that I would of never thought of. My descriptive essay was kind of hard to start off. I did not know where to begin or how my essay will end up when I was finish with it.

I wish I could of had wrote more on my paper so that the tutor could understand what my essay was about and so that he could of edited my essay more so that I could of use up more time. But since I did not have a clean draft, I had to start from scratch. What hold me back was that I did not take a fresh clean draft to the writing center. If I did go better prepare, I would of got better feedback and I would of use my time wisely instead of making an outline in which I spend all my tutoring session getting an outline. It was mostly my fault because I got held back on my assignment. In which I couldn't afford to do again on my next assignment.

Next time I have an appointment I'm going to have a clean draft so I could receive better feedback from the tutor. Rather than starting from the beginning like I did on the last essay. The tutor that I had was really lost on my paper. So I decided to start over again. When I was writing my paper I did not put everything in the right order and organize the way it was suppose to be. But my tutor was a lot of help towards my paper. Instead of using my method he used the same method he used on other students that had came in before me.