Reflecting on blog 3 #10

The difference between the third blog and the email etiquette essay is that we are now writing another fake email but this time to our instructor complaining about our grade and requesting reconsideration. This email has to be written in times roman numeral 12 using a memo format. In the etiquette essay we have to us first and third person other than pronoun shifting such as you or your.. In stead of saying I believe just say what you believe. Using text for text messaging not approve by my instructor, nor is slang such as language often used as street language. This email etiquette has to consider your audience, needs to be at least two to three well developed paragraphs long. We also have to include CC or BCC. In a fully developed body paragraph the discussion section should explain why the grade should be reconsidered and try to stay away from emotional appeals. Writing the conclusion you should never add new information because it will throw off the reader.

Rather in blog 3 we were only writing to a friend but it was about the same thing,but in this email all we had to write was about the bad test grade we had receive. We had to just type out our fake email to a friend with out all the considers like in the email etiquette. It was so much easier. But it did not look much interesting for a reader to read. I think that the reader will just act like they liked it but really they thought it was just an email that their friend wrote just complying about the bad grade they had got on there test. The email probably does not have right grammar such as language or its had too many run on sentences that doesn't ever end.